No, Daddy! I'm Not Mommy! (Quickies)
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| Rating | : | 4.47 (722 Votes) |
| Asin | : | 1519010060 |
| Format Type | : | paperback |
| Number of Pages | : | 40 Pages |
| Publish Date | : | 2013-06-26 |
| Language | : | English |
DESCRIPTION:
"Fantastic" according to Amazon Customer. I love the read, but I want her step dad to know what happened, I hope he was fake sleeping while Amber was riding him . An I want her mom to be OK with it or even joining in the sex Please make more series on this I want to know what happened. Needs to have more fluff. I felt like this story was set up very nicely for the climax, but it didn't quite deliever when it came. It didn't provide enough detail/wasn't long enough during the sexual acts between the daughter and father. It brushed by them too quickly. 2 extra pages should be added to each sexual to fully flesh out the story.Overall, I see a lot of promise here! Props to the autho. Scattered but good In my opinion the story had to many unnecessary details. The writing was good, but the parts about the sorority could have easily be reduced to a dorm room. Much the way her sister friend appeared for no reason. I'm sure the goal was to set up elements for a longer story. But they felt like intrusions not additions.
Amber, the house mother of the notorious sorority Phi Beta Pie, is home on vacation! What was intended to be a week of family bonding ends up being exactly that - in more ways than one!